I'm specifically looking at how each scene is organized and how it abides by the HIP structure (provided courtesy of Shawn).
Hook - start with an implicit question; the more energetic or primal (survival) the question is, the better
Intensity - ramp up the activity in the scene, drive it forward, bring the people to the edge of their seat
Prompt - end the scene with at least one question left unanswered; have the bad guy closing in with your hero backed into a corner; this drives people to read/watch more
- Opening - pictures on wall tell a story. introduction, conflict and resolution between Wallace and Gromit.
- P - spooky fully moon, howling and the title to match.
- alarm sequence
- H - creature stalks into garden. what/who is it?
- I - gnome alarm goes off. Wallace and Gromit spring into action with gadgets. What did they catch? Revealed to be a rabbit.
- P - villagers rejoice and we see a sign for the veggie contest
- back @ house
- H - knives! oh... Gromit's just chopping carrots. who are they for?
- I - Wallace is on diet but wants cheese. Gromit cares for his melon. Wallace breaks out mind device but is stopped from using by phone
- P - Lady Tottington calling for help with rabbits
- Tottington's house
- H - She wants rabbits gone (humanely)
- I - Victor wants her hand in marriage (and to kill the rabbits)
- P - Anti-pesto arrives
- Wallace and Gromit arrive
- H - Bun Vac 6000 - how does it work?
- I - Keeps Victor from shooting rabbits. Sucks up Victor and embarrasses him.
- P - Tottington says something - Wallace gets an idea! "Change their nature."
- Experiment
- H - says what he wants to accomplish
- I - accident!
- P - rabbit starts twitching
- Gromit pampers his melon
- H - all villagers tuck in veggies
- I - pan to lab
- P - rabbits are frightened by shaking in the cage of the other rabbit!
- Priest's green house
- H - who's there?
- I - monster eating veggies. shadow of the rabbit monster.
- P - Wallace wakes up. slept through alarms?!
- Town meeting
- H - everyone's upset
- I - priest tells of monster, frightens everyone.
- P - Victor wants to hunt it. Tottington wants Wallace to trap it.
- The big trap
- H - van with big female rabbit puppet
- I - where's Wallace? were rabbit attacks! Grommit gives chase.
- P - loses were rabbit
- Back to house
- H - were rabbit tracks... back to lab
- I - a lot of calls from angry villagers... but they discover the were rabbit in the lab. Gromit builds a stronger cage in the lab.
- P - Gromit then discovers Wallace is the were rabbit. The veggies! Oh no!
- Tottington's House
- H - Wallace is visits. Gromit follows. Must tell him!
- I - Victor is here too!
- P - Gromit turns on sprinklers to stop Wallace from eating carrot
- Road Home
- H - Road block! Victor cut the tree down.
- I - Victor gets out and threatens Wallace. We know what's coming... Wallace turns into were-rabbit and runs off.
- P - Victor's evil smile...
- Victor visits Vickor
- H - Victor needs something to kill the were rabbit
- I - Vickor knows what it takes
- P - golden bullets!
- Morning at the House
- H - Grommit is very careful.
- I - We all know Wallace is the were-rabbit now
- P - checks on the rabbit in cage
- Fair Prep
- H - People are upset. They all want the fair to still happen.
- I - Camilla hears lied to her that the beast was caught.
- P - Victor offers to solve it. (will hunt the beast down)
- Lady Tottington visits
- H - she visits as Wallace is changing into were rabbit
- I - tension mounts as Wallace gets closer to changing
- P - Lady gets turned away, hurt. Wallace changes into were-rabbit!
- Victor is here to kill Wallace
- H - Grommit trying to get him safe. lures him away with giant female rabbit puppet.
- I - Victor shoots! thinks it's done.
- P - It was just Grommit in suit. Victor traps Grommit and goes to find Wallace.
- Victor talks to crowd
- everyone knows the beast is still alive
- Grommit escapes
- H - uses alarm system and Wallace rabbit to escape and go save Wallace
- I - needs something as bait
- P - decides to sacrifice his prized melon
- Victor versus Camilla
- H - Victor wastes last gold bullet, and fights with Camilla for gold carrot trophy to use as bullet.
- I - Incites Wallace to come and save her.
- P - Wallace carries her to the secret garden
- Victor and Grommit goth trying to get to Wallace
- I - Victor's dog attacking Grommit
- Wallace falls and catches Grommit
- H - Wallace is now injured
- I - uses female suit on Victor as diversion from villagers
- P - uses cheese to revive Wallace
- Camilla makes her home a bunny sanctuary
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